Since you know the anatomy thing I will not mention that part xD
But since you got into shading, I would love to see it more bold, like her sash could be more shaded and defined. Maybe adding a texture of sorts with highlights as well, like fur or something. And the necklace is coming along great, but it could you more defined highlights, same goes for the earrings. With more detail they will appear more metallic then just placed there,since it seems to blend in too much to the skin.
Again, I know it was a sketch and all, it was just one of my favorite of your works so I would love it to be better someday xD Plus its to be fair for the awesome comment you left on my drawing. Thanks again.
No problem at all^^ it helps me see things better for giving better critiques. And no problem about not mentioning it, I figured you knew it was stylized anyway, so I didn't want to tell you something you already know xD Plus, I figured people who didn't read your description said it anyway O.o